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Opening Eyes 5 /Fin

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Reply MyaKonekko, Jun 07 2009 02:00 am

Clirk has been driven to kill Isabella for her "cruel" comment and now Sena is on a quest to find someone strong enough to stop him in order to save her first friend's life.

I don't know if I made her out of character, but I'm pretty sure (in my mind) that she would panic like this. Yeah, she kinda spotted Daze and is practically calling out to him. Funny, she doesn't see Mistoffeles yet. XDD

Yeah, that's right, Mistoffeles crawled into Daze's arms and fell right asleep. OvO Poor lil Daze is unaware of such an a--WTH IS HE SAYING IN HIS DREAMS? How indecent. TvT

Don't you worry, Isa will be saved.

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Reply MegamanZDevil, Jun 07 2009 02:22 am

@W@ JESUS CHRIST CLIRK. -KICKS HIM-

i'm glad you explained, i didn't know what was going on. ; ____ ;

Reply MyaKonekko, Jun 07 2009 02:33 am

Nickels- the characters are practically sprawled all over the place. OvO

Yeah, it's good and fun to explain things. Glad you benefitted from it because it looked confusing. O.O

Reply Natsuki, Jun 07 2009 10:29 am

;A;;; I'm still kinda confused @A@
OTL
so where did clirk go...? *is slo*

Reply MADxxasxaHATTER, Jun 07 2009 11:15 am

It's a little confusing, but I sort of get it now ;u;
It seems like this side story is rushing a little to get to the point, so maybe in your next pages Miya, could you slow it down a little please..? ;u;
Just because, not everyone reads the authour comments, and even with an explanation, it's still a bit confusing @@;;

Natsuki - They're in a different scene now, I think ;u;

Reply MyaKonekko, Jun 07 2009 12:56 pm

Natsuki- OTL|| Sorry, I rushed. Uhh, it switches to another scene where Sena is trying to get help.

Mad- I have trouble with that. I'm still learning though. orz Sorry for the confusion.

Reply Natsuki, Jun 08 2009 01:17 am

ohhhhh i think i get it noww ;3;

sorrie mya i hope i wasn't offending you...? ;A;

isabellaaaaaaaa ;A;;;;;;;;;;;

Reply MyaKonekko, Jun 08 2009 02:33 pm

Natsuki- Nah, you weren't. It was just a problem I've always had with making pages, I always rushed. XDD

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